We just finished up our marketing video and would love some feedback from the community. We've showed it to about 25 people so far and have received some solid criticism.
You can find it at www.nixty.com. Just click on the button that says "Catch the NIXTY vision".
Our specific questions are:
1. How do you feel at the end of the video?
2. Would you take the next step and explore the site?
3. Would you sign-up?
4. What don't you like?
You'll notice that there aren't specifics yet as to what the service will offer. We can't really disclose too much yet, but will in the near future. Our goals are to:
1. Show the big picture
2. Be open and welcoming
3. Encourage people to join us.
Thanks for taking the time to check it out.
I would have preferred 1 minute where you have a voiceover actor explain your mission, then 2 minutes where you go through the product. There's a web 2.0 marketplace where you can hire voiceover actors cheaply, or do it yourself. If you really can't talk about the product, I would still recommend having a voice talking about the mission.